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Jim lifted his sleeve and looked at his watch. He had been waiting for Andria for over an hour. Given their knack for getting into trouble he was beginning to worry. Before he could put his hand back in his pocket he felt slender finders slide into his palm. He sighed and turned his head to greet Andria. His fears put to rest when he saw her smiling face.
"Sorry, I'm late." She said as she laced their fingers together. ".....notice anything new about me?" She asked as she brought up her arm. Jim immediately noticed the bright red badge on her sleeve.
"You passed your Gunnery exam!"
"That's right. Can I get certain 'First Sergeant' to take me out to celebrate?"
"Anywhere you want." He said and let out a little chuckle. "Now we match."
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I haven't drawn these two since September and suddenly this scene popped into my head when I remembered Andria's field of study at the I.A. was logistics and artillery. Since Jim is Mr. Genius (and older than her) I made him a first sergeant - although I didn't put in the specific symbol in their badges (Andy's should have two riffles crossed in the center and Jim should have a diamond in the middle) I decided to keep it simple.
It was hard picking between Navy and Airforce ranks - they commend ships that fly, how are they classified? By combining the two that's how - Navy ranks shape with Airforce color. Speaking of which I revamped Jim's old jacket by mixing it with the classic aviator style and it looks really badass on him
Andria came out a little skinny but she's supposed to be so 
Jim belongs to Disney
Andy was made by me for him
Here's their story: [link]
"Sorry, I'm late." She said as she laced their fingers together. ".....notice anything new about me?" She asked as she brought up her arm. Jim immediately noticed the bright red badge on her sleeve.
"You passed your Gunnery exam!"
"That's right. Can I get certain 'First Sergeant' to take me out to celebrate?"
"Anywhere you want." He said and let out a little chuckle. "Now we match."
----
I haven't drawn these two since September and suddenly this scene popped into my head when I remembered Andria's field of study at the I.A. was logistics and artillery. Since Jim is Mr. Genius (and older than her) I made him a first sergeant - although I didn't put in the specific symbol in their badges (Andy's should have two riffles crossed in the center and Jim should have a diamond in the middle) I decided to keep it simple.
It was hard picking between Navy and Airforce ranks - they commend ships that fly, how are they classified? By combining the two that's how - Navy ranks shape with Airforce color. Speaking of which I revamped Jim's old jacket by mixing it with the classic aviator style and it looks really badass on him
Andria came out a little skinny but she's supposed to be so Jim belongs to Disney
Andy was made by me for him
Here's their story: [link]
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Your necks and shoulders are improving. The biggest thing here why is her chin extended so far forward? And if she's tilting her head forward why doesn't her neck reflect that? Her neck is neutral or even angled backwards, and her head is forward. I'm also not sure why she has that Morticia Addams [link] light on the center of her face thing.
The biggest problem you have here, and it really stands out here, is your problem with leg shape. She's got a nice curved out hip, but you've made her knee so small that the dramatic sway inward makes her look off balance. You regularly have a problem making joints much smaller than the rest of the limb in both arms and legs, when in fact the joint bones are heavier, so in slender people they are actually bigger around, not smaller. Anyway that round hip to that tiny knee really doesn't look right at all. You've still got a big problem with the calf muscle too.
[link] as you can see, the widest point of the calf muscle is in the upper quarter of the calf, closer to the knee. You regularly draw it almost halfway down the leg. It doesn't look right, and again going down to the WAY to small ankle (looks like her foot is going to snap off) it really makes for not-a-good leg shape.
![[link]](https://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lf7922pMuT1qenlil.jpg){kind=link}
The biggest problem you have here, and it really stands out here, is your problem with leg shape. She's got a nice curved out hip, but you've made her knee so small that the dramatic sway inward makes her look off balance. You regularly have a problem making joints much smaller than the rest of the limb in both arms and legs, when in fact the joint bones are heavier, so in slender people they are actually bigger around, not smaller. Anyway that round hip to that tiny knee really doesn't look right at all. You've still got a big problem with the calf muscle too.
[link] as you can see, the widest point of the calf muscle is in the upper quarter of the calf, closer to the knee. You regularly draw it almost halfway down the leg. It doesn't look right, and again going down to the WAY to small ankle (looks like her foot is going to snap off) it really makes for not-a-good leg shape.
![[link]](https://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://chestofbooks.com/health/anatomy/Human-Body-Construction/images/Fig-558-Surface-anatomy-of-the-leg.jpg){kind=link}